Vayu

Thursday, July 07, 2005

Lost in dreams

My days whither away like leaves in winter,
My thoughts are misty having no center.
Smiles and sorrows burried deep in my face,
Dreams and tears etching lines marking every phase
I am trying to grasp every moment
In vain I find I can only lament
What am I afraid of?
Losing my dreams-
Or losing myself in my dreams.

¶ 9:40 PM

Comments:

that was so sweet and good!
:)

happens to most of us..losing dream,s..or myself in my dreams..i liked that one...
:)

# posted by

monu : 11:47 PM

remba tanx....ellarum kavidhai yezhudirengalenu oru inspiration...

# posted by

karma : 12:15 AM

remba nallakku irukku,
yellorum kavaithaia yen yeathurangal? ennokku onnum puriyala,
last like remba nalla irukku,

loosing dreams, or loosing my self in my dreams

# posted by

ada-paavi!!!! : 12:29 AM

nee eppada rhymes ezhuda aarambichey

# posted by

ioiio : 2:16 PM

Nice .... But it portrays a very sober and dejected mood... Any relevance to real life, or just imagination?
Like every1 else said, last 2 lines steal the limelght :) cool...

# posted by

johnny boy : 3:32 PM

@vatsan,
thanks :-)
@ioiio,
12th std-le irundhu...appo appo inspiration varum...:-)
@sathys,
thats what i was doing yesterday and the result is there for everyone to see
@john,
this mood is to put a check on myself so that i dont bite more than i could chew :-)

# posted by

karma : 4:07 PM

Nice on Arvind.!

enna achu enna achu.!

# posted by

Narayanan Venkitu : 7:55 PM

@venkat sir,
Summa dhan sir...eppavume gujalsa irudhuta, gulssoda meaning-e puriyadhule..:-p

# posted by

karma : 9:01 PM

Nice =)

# posted by

Orange Fronkey : 11:45 PM

hey that was a good one :)

# posted by

Me : 12:48 AM

Losing my dreams or losing myself in my dreams - Wow! How true, very nice

# posted by

Unknown : 7:48 AM

@merino, me and wickedangel,
thanks :-)

# posted by

karma : 8:29 AM

Lost in dreams

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